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The Writers Desk - Story Round 2

Credit goes to these wonderful folks who took part in the next story round in thewriters desk. Thanks goes to Xadrian for running this baby!

Participants:

1 - Vendetta
2 - xadrian
3 - mwhite
4 - DestroyAll
5 - Ben C.
6 - banshee
7 - xadrian
8 - beejunk
9 - LoneWolf
10 - Ben C.

 



Word limit: 1500 words (no strict rule here) and prose.

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The Setting
It is the distant future. Humans have not developed faster than light travel, but can travel at speeds greater than current standards. They've used this to colonize worlds, and they've encountered no life forms thus far. To aid in their work they've developed AI technology to the point where thinking machines, androids, are common place.
The crew of the Maelstrom, a research vesel, has been given an assignment to study a remote planetary system, Tycho 233. Telemetry shows the system consisting of 5 Jovian planets, 2 Terrestrial and 3 Planetesimal. On the 2nd Terrestrial planet, an outpost as been setup to monitor the system, but has been abandoned years ago. The system circles a class B star (Blue, larger than our sun but not a giant.)
The research team is there for two reasons; to study the effects of this blue star on the terrestrial planets and determined what happened to the inhabitants of the outpost.

The Characters
- Sylvan Moore. Captain of the Maelstrom. Since it's a small ship and crew, he doubles as security and communications. It's basically his ship, even though he's not a scientist. The ship's ecoutrements are perfect for research and investigation. He's an aging man, but not yet out of his prime. He's even tempered, powerfully built and intelligent, but not an intellectual. He is considering retiring his ship and his services while both are able to enjoy the private sector.

- Dr. Susan Zenkami. Research team leader. Susan is a decorated military research specialist. Her life's focus as been on developing the android units for military action, but her sub-studies consist of stellar navigation and cartography. She's not sure why she was chosen for this mission as she's very close to the end of her term of service. She is open minded to new ideas, but also follows a stict scientific model; experimentation. She has no problem with being proven wrong as long as the data is emperical.

- Brother. A RA-5 model android assigned to accompany Dr. Zenkami on this mission. Brother is a slang term for non-military type androids. RA-5 is a new class and has a very good track record of service and reliability. While Brother is not programmed for combat, it is capable of super human feats at least of strength and computational ability. This Brother has been on only 2 other missions, both stellar cartography.

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"MAELSTORM"

Part 1 - Vendetta
“Can I assist you on your self examination, Doctor?” A voice warbled its way into Doctor Andrew Hale’s groggy head. As his eyes began to focus, black became peach and silver that slowly formed into the face of the android known as “Brother.” His silver eyes were the only obvious feature of Brother that distinguished him as being anything other than human. Brother smiled a soft, oddly friendly smile as he cocked his head slightly to the side as he patiently awaited a response.

Dr. Hale shook his head trying to chase away the fog that cluttered his mind from the years of being in suspended animation in the cryo-chamber. Humans had nearly perfected the art of cryo-stasis for the several years that trips through space took at near light speeds.

The key word being “nearly.”

There was a risk for anyone going into a cryo-chamber and because of that risk, the doctor was always the first to be awakened.

“I’m fine, thank-you, Brother,” Dr. Hale said as he felt sensation returning to his limbs and stepped weakly from the chamber. This had been his first experience in cryogenic sleep and despite his thorough training, the odd, tingling feeling in his muscles was still a surprise. Artificial stimulation of the muscles through electrical impulses that was used to prevent atrophy had a feeling similar to that of when your hand or leg “falls asleep.”

Brother smiled and stood up straight and offered his arm for support. Dr. Hale took the arm and shook each of his limbs. “You can begin the sequence on Captain Moore now, I’m fine,” the doctor stated.

“Captain Moore’s sequence was initiated 17 minutes and 37 seconds ago, Doctor,” Brother replied, looking over the doctor as if recording his vital signs and double-checking his claim to be “fine.”

“That’s quite efficient of you,” the doctor said sarcastically. The android missed the tone in the doctor’s voice and smiled softly as if it had been complimented.

“It is my goal to be efficient and productive, Doctor Hale,” Brother replied.

“What if something had gone wrong with my awakening or with the sequence? I don’t think it is wise to try overlapping something of this magnitude. People’s lives are at stake,” the doctor chided the android.

“The safety of the crew is my number one priority. Had something gone wrong, the first 22 minutes of the sequence is reversible without harm. We are still well within the safe limit to return the Captain to complete Cryo-stasis if that were needed. As well, I am fully programmed for all medical and emergency procedures,” the android said as it stepped away from the doctor, seeing he was now capable of standing under his own power.

The doctor nodded. There was no point in arguing with an android anyway. “Gather my equipment to the Captain’s cryo-chamber. I’m going to take a quick shower if anything goes wrong.” The android nodded again and watched as the doctor walked toward the crew quarters.

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It had been a day and a half since he had come out of suspended animation and Captain Sylvan Moore was finally starting to feel himself again. He was sitting comfortably in the pilot’s chair on the bridge of his ship, The Maelstrom. To his right sat Lieutenant Jameson Young, ecology specialist, geologist, anthropologist and all around know-it-all. Young was the only person Moore had known prior to the assignment of the crew to this mission and Sylvan wasn’t exactly thrilled with his presence. To Sylvan, Jameson Young was too much of a “company man” who put the wishes of the fleet ahead of a crew. But the Global Space Command would not allow the mission if one of their own was not on the crew. The thing that bothered him the most was that Dr. Susan Zenkami, a stellar navigations expert and android specialist was also from command and, in fact, was the team leader.

“And that is the 50,000 kilometer mark.” Jameson stated as if Sylvan were not paying attention to his instrument panels. Jameson stared at Sylvan for a minute. “Aren’t you going to adjust the vector of The Maelstrom for ‘gradual orbital acceptance?’” he asked. To Sylvan Moore, however, it was not a question.

“G.O.A. is a waste of time…” Sylvan began.

“Gradual Orbital Acceptance is a command procedure for all…” Jameson cut him off but was himself interrupted in return.

“This is NOT a GSC ship. I am the Captain and The Maelstrom’s course will be determined by me!” Sylvan snapped. Jameson didn’t reply but sat upright in his chair staring at Sylvan, his eyes boring a hole into the side of the Captain’s head.

It almost made Sylvan laugh. He wondered where the sudden hostility had come from. He wasn’t normally like that. But there was just something about Jameson that irked him. There was nothing wrong with “gradual orbital acceptance” but it certainly wasn’t